"By my intimacy with nature I find myself withdrawn from man. My interest in the sun and the moon, in the morning and the evening, compels me to solitude." - Thoreau
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it seems like you are speaking to someone, or perhaps to nature itself... "pray to the sky".... you also seem to question nature...the tides, night and day...you are one with nature....the whispers, the feelings, the feelings. the laughs....rhyming is quite good...
Warmly, B
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
thanks B. i'm probably questioning god as to why things are as they are and certain things we can't.. read morethanks B. i'm probably questioning god as to why things are as they are and certain things we can't change and have to live with. some things never change and others are in a constant state of flux ... :)
it seems like you are speaking to someone, or perhaps to nature itself... "pray to the sky".... you also seem to question nature...the tides, night and day...you are one with nature....the whispers, the feelings, the feelings. the laughs....rhyming is quite good...
Warmly, B
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
thanks B. i'm probably questioning god as to why things are as they are and certain things we can't.. read morethanks B. i'm probably questioning god as to why things are as they are and certain things we can't change and have to live with. some things never change and others are in a constant state of flux ... :)
Nicely rhymed and excellently timed; I feel the poet's release of someone or something, questioning what befell before and after. The wh's are so important in the greater scheme of things.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
it is said that everything happens for a reason. in my arrogance, i always want to know i'm often .. read moreit is said that everything happens for a reason. in my arrogance, i always want to know i'm often my own worst enemy over-analyzing everything. i'm the guy standing at the fork in the road unable to choose a way ... :)
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..