"Though my life is low, if my spirit looks upward habitually at an elevated angle, it is as if it were redeemed. When the desire to be better than we are is really sincere we are instantly elevated, and so far better already." - Thoreau
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Wow. What a point you made here. Of course one cannot become a Mozart or Pavarotti or even a crow if one just fancies oneself to be and yet, one can be anything in one's own head. I loved the very entertaining poem, the thoughtful examples, illustrations, imagery. Together, it all blended into a poem so novel and superb.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
lol. thank you so much for sharing thoughts. perhaps this is the recipe for success - thinking tha.. read morelol. thank you so much for sharing thoughts. perhaps this is the recipe for success - thinking that we are more than we actually are. maybe if we think it we can become it no matter. who cares what others think of us if we can be legends in our own minds ... :)
Desire and imagination can indeed help you go far. However, striding about with a towel affixed around your neck with a clothespin and holding a wooden spoon may get you detained.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
lol. that would be okay if my desire was to be a straight-jacket model ... :)
"For as he thinks in his heart, so is he. " proverbs - without that upward desire and look we at best remain the same or perhaps lose the vision and sink a bit lower. Have to think that is in some way what constrains us to write. -carl
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1 Year Ago
so true carl - if we don't aspire then all we do is perspire and then expire. it all starts by thin.. read moreso true carl - if we don't aspire then all we do is perspire and then expire. it all starts by thinking higher than ourselves, outside the box ... :)
So what you are saying is when I move up and down the frets of my air guitar I am not Eddie Van Halen...darn...well ok, then I'll just have to be Slash and leave it at that. Very cool my friend, in our minds, in our daydreams we can certainly be anyone or anything we want to.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
lol. isn't that what we all do though? why else would we watch the news - we imagine ourselves in .. read morelol. isn't that what we all do though? why else would we watch the news - we imagine ourselves in other people's shoes and say to ourselves, "if i was him or her this is how i would feel and what i would do." or i'm glad i'm not him or her." we forget that to be someone or something else means that we get their problems along with the advantages.
lately i'm donald trump ... :)
1 Year Ago
of course eddie died of cancer not too long ago. he used to clip lit cigarettes to the neck of his .. read moreof course eddie died of cancer not too long ago. he used to clip lit cigarettes to the neck of his guitar ... :)
But these words surely do make you a clever poet, Pete...and a very entertaining one at that.
j.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
lol. thank you j. how can we laugh at the antics of others if we don't first practice on ourselves.. read morelol. thank you j. how can we laugh at the antics of others if we don't first practice on ourselves?
"Man is the artificer of his own happiness." - Thoreau
Wow. What a point you made here. Of course one cannot become a Mozart or Pavarotti or even a crow if one just fancies oneself to be and yet, one can be anything in one's own head. I loved the very entertaining poem, the thoughtful examples, illustrations, imagery. Together, it all blended into a poem so novel and superb.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
lol. thank you so much for sharing thoughts. perhaps this is the recipe for success - thinking tha.. read morelol. thank you so much for sharing thoughts. perhaps this is the recipe for success - thinking that we are more than we actually are. maybe if we think it we can become it no matter. who cares what others think of us if we can be legends in our own minds ... :)
Reach for the stars, even if you are in the gutter. Really enjoyed this write Pete. Desire and imagination are everything to better ourselves. Happy Monday to you.
Chris
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
whose going to stop us but ourselves, right? wishing you well as a thunderstorm is a very near miss.. read morewhose going to stop us but ourselves, right? wishing you well as a thunderstorm is a very near miss here. hopefully i can get in my daily constitutional by the river and old mill ... :)
1 Year Ago
Keep safe and out of harms way Pete. The river will still be there tomorrow:)
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..