"I once found a kernel of corn in the middle of a deep wood by Walden, tucked in behind a lichen on a pine, about as high as my head, either by a crow or a squirrel. It was a mile at least from any corn-field." - Thoreau
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your poem is too deep for my simple mind to appreciate, but your mention of crows brings to mind a nest that has been established in a streetlamp, in a busy shopping area, from which pedestrians are being continually bombarded by overly protective parents.
kind of funny unless it is your unprotected bald head that is being perforated
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
lol. well they have to live somewhere and raise their family as do we but man keeps encroaching on .. read morelol. well they have to live somewhere and raise their family as do we but man keeps encroaching on their habitat. that's why i always wear a hat ... :)
I like the fact that you included the consequential and inconsequential in your reasons for conflict. One of my favorite poems is The Butter Battle which I understand is not really about butter, but people can find anything about which to disagree, complain, or fight. Really like the structure and flow of your work. favorite line "headstones stand to preach the sky"
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
spot on observations carl, appreciated. so true about people finding anything to justify conflict.<.. read morespot on observations carl, appreciated. so true about people finding anything to justify conflict.
as my muse thoreau wrote, “Any man more right than his neighbors constitutes a majority of one already.”
your poem is too deep for my simple mind to appreciate, but your mention of crows brings to mind a nest that has been established in a streetlamp, in a busy shopping area, from which pedestrians are being continually bombarded by overly protective parents.
kind of funny unless it is your unprotected bald head that is being perforated
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
lol. well they have to live somewhere and raise their family as do we but man keeps encroaching on .. read morelol. well they have to live somewhere and raise their family as do we but man keeps encroaching on their habitat. that's why i always wear a hat ... :)
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..