Sorry, We Don't Deliver

stone cold, you broke my heart

a heart covered by a love note, like a warm, winter coat

but your scissors cut that note

that note thinking it covered rock let alone stone

now i'm confused and alone

expecting rock to break scissors

so much for a game

where none of them delivers

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

tearing up a love note, like tearing up one's heart....confused and alone, where to go? what to do? it can be devastating.... you painted an honest picture of this terrible consequence....there is no game here...just pure anger and fear.....and maybe retribution....
Best, B

[Pete]

ouch. thanks for the shared thoughts betty. you're absolutely right - matters of the heart should not be played like a game ... :)

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Pete.
Best, B