Come What Will,  Be What May

Come What Will, Be What May

A Poem by Pete
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It's the beauty within us that makes it possible for us to recognize the beauty around us. The question is not what you look at but what you see. - Thoreau

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Pin on Writing: Place/Scene Prompts

spending time
amidst seemingly nothing
one easter sunday
down by a dirty old river
a slice of time, a splinter, a sliver
decided to lay my head down 'pon an embankment
a rare chance to drink in some enchantment

immediately spying a hawk circling way up high in a denim sky
it neither stopped to ask how nor why
not even inquiring as to how i felt
'round and 'round as it searched for its next meal
through thin wisps of white clouds as god smoked a cigarette
shaking his finger back and forth at me as he said, "not you, not yet"

twin pines standing guard over me
quietly arrogant and silently bold
each one about a century and a half tall and likewise old
they said nothing although there was much they could have told
much they could have sold

the nearby water gurgled its secrets in a mysterious hum of white noise
sometimes in a rush to climb over deaf rocks but always maintaining dignity and poise
calling out to all the good little girls and boys
as it willingly played with some of eternity's amplified, electrical, musical toys
in a seeming rush to divulge all that it knows
carefully rolling down yesterday's torn, worn, reborn panty hose

spending time
amidst seemingly nothing
one easter sunday
just another risen april day
lots to shout but little to say
come what will
be what may



© 2023 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
“You must live in the present, launch yourself on every wave, find your eternity in each moment. Fools stand on their island of opportunities and look toward another land. There is no other land; there is no other life but this.” - Thoreau

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Funny, we as poets seem to be constantly immersed, involved and implanted in nature, it is a guiding force but once we venture out into it, it ignores us like we are nothing. Who knew nature was this ignorant.
Nice one my friend. I especially liked "denim sky"

P.S. Loved The Police rehearsal video, never heard that before.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

as my mused thoreau wrote over 150 years ago, "Things don't change. We change." true what you say a.. read more
willweb

1 Year Ago

I couldn't agree more...saw him live solo on the Nothing like the sun tour and then saw him with The.. read more



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Funny, we as poets seem to be constantly immersed, involved and implanted in nature, it is a guiding force but once we venture out into it, it ignores us like we are nothing. Who knew nature was this ignorant.
Nice one my friend. I especially liked "denim sky"

P.S. Loved The Police rehearsal video, never heard that before.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

as my mused thoreau wrote over 150 years ago, "Things don't change. We change." true what you say a.. read more
willweb

1 Year Ago

I couldn't agree more...saw him live solo on the Nothing like the sun tour and then saw him with The.. read more
A glorious poem
Loved this one and the pic

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

thanks julie. i appreciate your thoughts ... :)
Sometimes you can't change your circumstances.... be what may.... this poem has a bit of sadness and loneliness in it and it seemed like you were looking for answers from nature itself ... but none came and nothing changed.... that happen to all of us...we look to nature or something else to find answers.....as you said Easter was just another day risen.
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

wow betty. you have a sharp eye along with a keen sense of insight. you are remarkably spot on. I.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

you're very welcome Pete!
Best, B
A message oneness with the Divine and nature; trying to enjoy and make sense of it all. Lots of opportunities rear their heads before and after.
Hold on to the one and only God and He will light up your paths.
You are a thinker and a poet indeed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

thanks for the share sami. oh i'm something all right - they're still trying to figure out just wha.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

All wonderful. You are welcome sir Pete.
Evocative, atmospheric and beautifully written. I could see the visuals plainly and feel the atmosphere on my face that one Easter morning.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

i am grateful for the kind share from a gentleman and scholar ... :)

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