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One Man's Mansion

One Man's Mansion

A Poem by Pete
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Much of our poetry has the very best manners, but no character. - Thoreau

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Free Images : wood, countryside, mansion, roof, building ...

sometimes there are no words with which to rhyme
tears and joy have little to whisper or tell
other times assonance has no choice but to clear its longing throat
emotions spill in felt enjambment
feelings dance in a high heeled scansion
a tuxedeoed iambic pentameter its weary partner
turning a lonely poet's shack into an extravagant abode high up on a hill

loosed entanglements amidst tethered liberations
thoughts of biblical and epic proportion singing out in a forced march of intention
running barefoot, unencumbered through fields of tall grass
swimming naked in once deep, frozen kettles
until eternity is felt in the here and now
as wordplay jingles loose change in once empty pockets
and a prodigal yesterday returns home on winds of tomorrow
in the shadow of a swollen tide
slapping rocks across the face with a white glove in retribution for an invitation never received


© 2023 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"There is no doubt that the loftiest written wisdom is either rhymed or in some way musically measured,--is, in form as well as substance, poetry; and a volume which should contain the condensed wisdom of mankind need not have one rhythmless line." - Thoreau

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The poem, the song, both rock loudly. Your words are very cool my friend and you already know my love for Zep. One thing though...in your poem, "Fields of tall grass" instantly took me to "Spill the Wine" by Eric Burden Pretty damn cool.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Pete

1 Year Ago

i love burden and war and have used that song with other writes. as always thanks for taking the ti.. read more

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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