Is, Was Or Ever Could Be

Is, Was Or Ever Could Be

A Poem by Pete
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The bluebird carries the sky on his back. - Thoreau

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Bird Drawing Blue jay, blue bird, blue, png Material, pencil png | PNGWing

never a pretentious pretender
never a borrower, always a lender
over a hardwood floor of late winter scarcity littered with fallen remnants of crusted snow
a blue jay visited this morning just outside my window

perched 'pon a large branch which had grown into a bent, aching knee
me in my lonely chair amidst spindles of doldrums and despair
it must have come for me
blinding my eyes to see
turning a pearly gate's rusty key
'tis the only possible explanation there

is, was or ever could be
 




© 2023 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"A man's interest in a single bluebird is worth more than a complete but dry list of the fauna and flora of a town." - Thoreau

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I love the first bluebirds of Spring. We had some build a nest in our birdhouse and my little girl named them Blue and Violet (smile) I enjoyed your poem. But your picture isn't of a bluebird. That is a Blue jay or jaybird as we sometimes call them. They always show up at my feeder for the peanuts I put out for the squirrels. They're notorious bullies and robbers but I don't mind feeding them at all, even if their song is more akin to a crow's caw than the chittering sweet song of the bluebird. Keep writing the wonderful poetry. F.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

that's cute about your daughter. i didn't realize that i had typed "bluebird" and have changed it. .. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

1 Year Ago

I have heard Blue jays this morning already. Their call is like a high pitched taxi horn. Beep beep.. read more
Pete

1 Year Ago

just thought i'd tell you that the blue jay just visited me again this morning landing in the small .. read more



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I heard the birds song this morning in my yard. Maybe Spring is near. A lovely poem shared Pete. I need a warm day. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

thanks coyote. I think spring has sprung. seeing that jaybird made my day and was the usher of a n.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Pete.
I live on Blue Jay lane, but have visits from both Jays and Bluebirds, both are so pretty.
Nature makes me glad to be alive.
such an interesting poem here, Pete.
Thoreau would have liked it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

lucky you. oh precious nature. i don't see many bluebirds but an occasional blue jay around here. .. read more
Pete

1 Year Ago

... and they bring us so much more than they take ... :)
The best thing about bluebirds is they don't say "Nevermore."

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

thanks j. the b. sure would be interesting to know what they really are saying - after all, as told.. read more
I love the first bluebirds of Spring. We had some build a nest in our birdhouse and my little girl named them Blue and Violet (smile) I enjoyed your poem. But your picture isn't of a bluebird. That is a Blue jay or jaybird as we sometimes call them. They always show up at my feeder for the peanuts I put out for the squirrels. They're notorious bullies and robbers but I don't mind feeding them at all, even if their song is more akin to a crow's caw than the chittering sweet song of the bluebird. Keep writing the wonderful poetry. F.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

that's cute about your daughter. i didn't realize that i had typed "bluebird" and have changed it. .. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

1 Year Ago

I have heard Blue jays this morning already. Their call is like a high pitched taxi horn. Beep beep.. read more
Pete

1 Year Ago

just thought i'd tell you that the blue jay just visited me again this morning landing in the small .. read more
Such an extraordinary poem. A most profound lament to a bluebird I shall never read again. And what a punchline you delivered as a closing!!! Pete, this one's golden. Hang a star on it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelly Scheppers

1 Year Ago

That's a beautiful quote by Thoreau too, I forgot to mention. Was that the inspiration you drew fro.. read more
Pete

1 Year Ago

thanks. seeing it first thing this morning when I looked out the window was the inspiration and the.. read more
Pete

1 Year Ago

one time I saw a big owl - talk about majestic! it's hoots echoed through the woods and the way its.. read more
I really liked that Pete. As if just sitting here viewing a painting your words created art for me.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

thanks ww. first thing i saw this morning when i looked out. sometimes that's all it takes to make.. read more

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