In The Eye of The 'Be Holder'

In The Eye of The 'Be Holder'

A Poem by Pete
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It’s not what you look at that matters, it’s what you see. - Thoreau

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he couldn't see the forest for the trees
didn't feel wind for the breeze
couldn't start the car even with the keys
couldn't beg despite knowing how to say, "please"
couldn't taunt whilst being able to tease
let alone see prayers answered despite having worn knees



© 2023 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"I would give all the wealth of the world, and all the deeds of all the heroes, for one true vision." - Thoreau

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In all honesty, it reminds me of something a person may hear on the radio circa 1939.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

thanks. wondering why that is and why that year?
Life is perception
It’s all how we see it
Very deep poem
Great write
One persons beauty they see in a flower weed dandelion is another’s weed
Ps Love the band and song

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

hi julie. your observations are spot on of course but try as i may to have a good outlook my cup te.. read more

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Added on February 6, 2023
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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