When It's Better To Hear Than See

When It's Better To Hear Than See

A Poem by Pete
"

When I hear music, I fear no danger. I am invulnerable. - Thoreau

"
Does Loud Music Get You Drunk Faster? - The Drunk Pirate

scaling higher and higher in a melodic sand dune
crank up the tune
all the way to the moon
as loud as possible
than crank it up some more
until it blows out the windows and opens everyone's door
cleaning out my attic of all the junk
making room for strutting, gyrating rhythm and funk

bass so low you think it's thundering under a london fog
as the pace morphs into a remembering sprint from a forgetful jog
i want to feel the percussion beating  me down
shaking the very ground
from head to toes
after all, drumming always foretells and knows
cymbals crashing in my soul
as angels commence to bowl
aplomb
in the atomic psalm of a cantabile bomb

keyboards pressing all the right keys
never needing to say thank you or please
guitars wailing life's joy and sorrow
so that today has no choice but to hold hands with tomorrow
in a bipolar mania of feelings and emotions
piking and strumming up and down so fast
i want nothing more than for it to simply last
ushering in the future and seating the past
god himself in the very lyrics of the front row
i don't just think this, i know

losing all control
picking up the scattered, spilled pieces and making me whole
raising me up and removing a deaf silence's shroud
drawing folks to a miracle from miles around in an eternal, rocking crowd
all heaven giving a standing ovation
the devil rising to his burning, slithering feet as he relinquishes causation
i might not know much
may even be a bit too proud
but i do know that it's better loud
it's gotta be
for all those times

when it's better to hear than see



© 2023 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"The pleasure we feel in music springs from the obedience which is in it." - Thoreau

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It is always better loud in my opinion, music is meant to be heard and felt, just like you very cool poems states. Nicely done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

you obviously get it. thanks ww ... :)

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