Forlorn

Forlorn

A Poem by Pete
"

Not till we are lost, in other words, not till we have lost the world, do we begin to find ourselves, and realize where we are and the infinite extent of our relations. - Thoreau

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John William Waterhouse - The Lady of Shalott - Google Art Project edit.jpg
Painting: The Lady of Shallott by John William Waterhouse

lost
out of control
bemused
no gps
no s.o.s
no way to know, no way to guess
strange people
odd surroundings
where am i

this place where upstream is down and downstream is up
where a cup is a dish and a dish is a cup
this place with tall, swaying, laughing trees
this place where today's wind trades places with tomorrow's breeze
someone help me, please
can't you see, i'm begging, down upon my knees
help me find my lost keys

adrift in a bereft gravy boat of indecision
help me pay the steep toll
quickly, before i grow too old
before i fall through the crack
before grey deepens to black
please
help me find my way back



© 2023 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
“The universe constantly and obediently answers to our conceptions; whether we travel fast or slow, the track is laid for us. Let us spend our lives in conceiving then. The poet or the artist never yet had so fair and noble a design but some of his posterity at least could accomplish it.” - Thoreau

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It must feel like an abyss of loneliness to be lost in that place. To feel abandoned and without hope; a desperation that one would grab our hand and save us.

I love your Thoreau quotes. They add quite nicely to your message.
Thank you for sharing. A contemplative piece for sure!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

thanks seriana. yes, being lost does not feel good but it is during such times that we find out who.. read more



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It must feel like an abyss of loneliness to be lost in that place. To feel abandoned and without hope; a desperation that one would grab our hand and save us.

I love your Thoreau quotes. They add quite nicely to your message.
Thank you for sharing. A contemplative piece for sure!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Year Ago

thanks seriana. yes, being lost does not feel good but it is during such times that we find out who.. read more

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