Magic Marker

Be yourself, not your idea of what you think somebody else’s idea of yourself should be. - Thoreau

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long ago in restless youth

now in presumptuous, sedate maturity

disturbing nature's sanctity and purity

writing myself into the annals of snow

urine my ink

never quite enough to cross all the "tease" and dot all the "eyes" that wink

regardless of what others may know or think

Author's Note

"Write while the heat is in you. The writer who postpones the recording of his thoughts uses an iron which has cooled to burn a hole with. He cannot inflame the minds of his audience." - Thoreau

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Oh boy do i relate to your authors notes!!!
I write when i feel this urgent pull to sit down and write.. Never have any idea what will pour out of me and onto the paper...I wrote a poem Thoughts...
Not a complicated message..
Anyway, I did enjoy this read .. my first of yours..
New to Writers cafe.. never submitted my work anywhere before..so this is quite an adventure,
Lisa

[Re-Pete]

thank you and welcome! ... :)

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re an individualist and when you feel like doing something that others may feel is destructive, doesn’t bother you at all…..one’s freedom to act is his right, even though a bit out of the norm. Good for you!
Best
Betty

[Re-Pete]

so true that we must be our undeniable selves. thanks for the vote of approval betty ... :)

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Pete!

[C. M. Miller]

A brief poem full of honest meaning, and yeah, what others think? Screw 'em, most likely they are only thinking of themselves, but jealous nevertheless 'cuz they can't rub two words or more together that have any meaning. (Just a suggestion, drink more water next time :-)

[Re-Pete]

thanks. those who can't/won't do sit and complain. never enough ink so good to keep well hydrated ... :)

[lightsong]

and please DO! You are a Magic Maker and never less than this! actually I really love your strong, angry (in the meaning of not caring about anything sorry my English is still not the best :>) tone in your lines... dear Pete, don't let anyone or anything have power on You, and don't let anyone take away your power, You already know how much I admire and love your poetry, if someone don't know how to read it, I feel sorry for them because they are not awakened or evolved yet. Smile*

[Re-Pete]

thank you dear friend of spirited words ... :)

[Sami Khalil]

I would not erase any memory that became part of us...

[Re-Pete]

nor would i. thank you sami ... :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)................................

[Sami Khalil]

And you write marvelously. Sometimes our writings feel like frozen, stuck in seasons and waiting for releases. Sometimes they burn holes in our hearts to get them out. Our writes come alive in due times and under certain inspirations.

[Re-Pete]

like fine wine waiting to be uncorked. thank you ... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrr .......
You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

"writing myself into the annals of snow"

[Re-Pete]

funny how these odd things find a place in our hearts and memories ... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr.................

[Kelly Scheppers]

Great quote, Pete! You certainly inflame the minds of many poets, giving us something to cogitate, every time. So good to see you this morning. Hope all is warm and well in your world!

[Re-Pete]

i guess we're never really out of ink to express ourselves if we reach deeply enough inside! thanks for sharing kelly ... :

[Ken Simm.]

Learning is always inchoate. This is very well written and its truths so well observed.

[Re-Pete]

thank you for sharing ken. some never learn or refuse conformity for good or bad.

“Whatever has not come under the sway of man is wild. In this sense original and independent men are wild – not tamed and broken by society.” - Thoreau

[Ken Simm.]

I'm impressed that you can cross the t's and dot the i's in the snow as well.

[Re-Pete]

... takes a wee bit of ale to accentuate and properly punctuate ... :)

[Ruth]

Inner battles or growth are just that...no-one truly knows what another is facing or realising, coping with etc...there is always something to reflect on deeply in your writing Pete :)

[Re-Pete]

... and you are always able to look below the surface and find an ore of our truths ... :)