"In any weather, at any hour of the day or night, I have been anxious to improve the nick of time, and notch it on my stick too; to stand on the meeting of two eternities, the past and future, which is precisely the present moment; to toe that line." - Thoreau
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I am fascinated by watches, not the glittery facades that imply wealth or taste, no the guts of the things. The hard little filling that grinds fine time into labels for us. Also inside the relentless b******s are tiny jeweled pivots that remind us of missed chances and turns that whizzed by untraveled.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
time has a way of wearing us down. we each bear its burden differently - i guess that's why there a.. read moretime has a way of wearing us down. we each bear its burden differently - i guess that's why there are different kinds of watches - battery cell or wind up. time is measured the same and never changes. a second is always a second, a minute 60 secs, etc. no person or watch can measure eternity though. thank you for sharing thoughts d.c. ... :)
god, Pete, the first line could be a poem by itself...that really is striking opener for this
insightful piece full of wonderful metaphor.
the world is so different now...all of our interests are drying up...we are isolated...no hand to hold,
no full face to smile with or at...
we are all cutting that rug...and getting very flaky.....
You have such a deep way of writing about life now and then.
j.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
thanks j. we're certainly living in trying times (pun intended). who'd have thought that life coul.. read morethanks j. we're certainly living in trying times (pun intended). who'd have thought that life could ever be like this? we don't know when and how things will resolve. time cuts like a double edged sword ... :)
This is such a clever, cute write, I remember when I used to miss being with someone.
I enjoyed this write
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4 Years Ago
time is a funny thing. it can really drag when we're lonely but we want it to slow down when we've .. read moretime is a funny thing. it can really drag when we're lonely but we want it to slow down when we've got what we want so we can enjoy it longer. if only it worked that way ... :)
Awe to improve upon tomorrow by borrowing against yesterday. Sign and notarize here please.
Nothing consumes us more than tears from a dry place.
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4 Years Ago
thanks for sharing a timeless thought cherrie. as my muse thoreau wrote a long time ago, read morethanks for sharing a timeless thought cherrie. as my muse thoreau wrote a long time ago,
"You must live in the present, launch yourself on every wave, find your eternity in each moment."
keep safe and well ... :)
4 Years Ago
yes, I always love to see what Thoreau, saying you will have. :)
I love how your title is a spoof on the dumb old adage "time will tell" -- so perfect for today's world when time drags us deeper & deeper into unfathomable unknowns. You have definitely come up with your most dazzling collection of tweaked phrases - plenty of abstract weirdness here, mind-boggling the way you twist predictable sentiments upside down & make it sound like you're delivering profound logic. Reading this is similar to how I feel when listening to some of the political rhetoric these days. Some people sound like they're creating noise & issuing grievances for a lack of anything substantive or convincing to say! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
yes, that old adage - what if it doesn't and things just stay twisted and get even worse - after a w.. read moreyes, that old adage - what if it doesn't and things just stay twisted and get even worse - after a while we start to think that craziness is normal. too many people like to flap their jaws about nothing - i swear they're just killing time. don't get me started on the politicos, they're the worst - they could sell sand in a desert ... :)
What a sense of chaos I got reading these lines Pete. All while the clock is ticking away. Time stops for no man. How many though live in the present? Not many. Most live in the past or future.
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4 Years Ago
yes indeedy - we're living in chaotic times. i like your thoughts - seems like we're not living in t.. read moreyes indeedy - we're living in chaotic times. i like your thoughts - seems like we're not living in the present anymore. folks are pining for the past or anticipating a better future. thanks for stopping (pun intended) chris. oh, i just remembered, daylight savings time ends saturday night - clock falling back 1 hour ... :)
I am fascinated by watches, not the glittery facades that imply wealth or taste, no the guts of the things. The hard little filling that grinds fine time into labels for us. Also inside the relentless b******s are tiny jeweled pivots that remind us of missed chances and turns that whizzed by untraveled.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
time has a way of wearing us down. we each bear its burden differently - i guess that's why there a.. read moretime has a way of wearing us down. we each bear its burden differently - i guess that's why there are different kinds of watches - battery cell or wind up. time is measured the same and never changes. a second is always a second, a minute 60 secs, etc. no person or watch can measure eternity though. thank you for sharing thoughts d.c. ... :)
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