When Sourdough Rises

When Sourdough Rises

A Poem by Pete
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We must first succeed alone, that we may enjoy our success together. That we have but little faith is not sad, but that we have little faithfulness. By faithfulness faith is earned. - Thoreau

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Dumpster Diving: One Person's Trash Could Be Your Treasure.

shell-shocked and devastated
with a swollen spirit and hunger unsatiated
he reached deep down into the dumpster of desperation and despair
to feed his flesh
to nourish his soul

he needed to eat regardless of his spirit's shackles
despite being surrounded by hungry jackals
and life's hard crust that crackles

it didn't matter that the bread was old
that it had mold
that the day was cold
the limit of what his frigid fingers could hold
that his shoes had holes
or that the container could be rolled
not even that his faith was old

he had to be bold
the loaf had already been bought and sold

all that mattered was that the truth be told



© 2020 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"Bread may not always nourish us; but it always does us good, it even takes stiffness out of our joints, and makes us supple and buoyant, when we knew not what ailed us, to recognize any generosity in man or Nature, to share any unmixed and heroic joy." - Thoreau

"Our bread need not ever be sour or hard to digest. What Nature is to the mind she is also to the body. As she feeds my imagination, she will feed my body; for what she says she means, and is ready to do. She is not simply beautiful to the poet's eye. Not only the rainbow and sunset are beautiful, but to be fed and clothed, sheltered and warmed aright, are equally beautiful and inspiring. There is not necessarily any gross and ugly fact which may not be eradicated from the life of man." - Thoreau

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Hunger, it is said, is the best sauce. I must wonder, what with so many people having lost work during the pandemic, whether dumpster diving will become more commonplace in this country. Thoreau was right; bread is good. Of course, if you're hungry enough, anything is good.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

very true what you say. one thing i've learned is that the almighty always provides somehow, usuall.. read more
Pete

4 Years Ago

my muse thoreau also wrote,

“Why should we live with such hurry and waste of life? .. read more
John the Baptist

4 Years Ago

Actually, though I am a retired mental health worker, I don't recall any fox suicides, either. Of co.. read more



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I am very inclined to raisin bread, toasted and smothered in butter
Not found in dumpsters where too many poor souls spend their time looking and with winter coming, the situation becomes much worse

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

thanks for caring dave. a different perspective on our daily bread - makes me appreciate the little.. read more
I find your Thoreau quotes so interesting Pete. I have never known what it is like to be hungry and to need shelter. The very basic requirements and yet so many are without. With the pandemic, loss of jobs, the whole situation I fear is going to get a whole lot worse. I am reminded that if you are starving, you will eat anything to assuage that hunger. All of us need to be generous. Enjoyed your choice of music and your new avatar is grand Pete. All the best and keep safe.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

thank chris. thoreau was an amazing man - way ahead of his time and well grounded in decency. his .. read more
After a long kickass string of rhyming riffs, we get to the crux of the matter . . . the less one has in a physical realm, the easier it is to strip away the bullshit. Having a bunch of stuff (in my humble opinion) tends to make people defend that stuff, possibly with more vigor than they might defend a pet or a friend. As much as half this country hates the direction this country is going in, a lot of it centers around greed. Anyhow, I better shut up right here becuz I might get a little too loose with the lips & piss people off like I've been doing lately. You probably remember that some neighbor beat up the senator Rand Paul . . . my high school friend was married to that neighbor & she's a fiery one who've I've just listened to rant for a half hour. I feel myself possibly wanting to spill, but I'll go water my garden instead. I picked seven big luscious figs -- the first my trees have produced since I planted them 2 years ago. I am SOOOOO glad I didn't have to evacuate & leave my garden! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

thanks margie. no need to shut up, i appreciate your thoughts. you're right though - the more we p.. read more
barleygirl

4 Years Ago

I didn't realize Jesus said that! I find it interesting the way you equate "rich" with the entire US.. read more
Hunger, it is said, is the best sauce. I must wonder, what with so many people having lost work during the pandemic, whether dumpster diving will become more commonplace in this country. Thoreau was right; bread is good. Of course, if you're hungry enough, anything is good.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

very true what you say. one thing i've learned is that the almighty always provides somehow, usuall.. read more
Pete

4 Years Ago

my muse thoreau also wrote,

“Why should we live with such hurry and waste of life? .. read more
John the Baptist

4 Years Ago

Actually, though I am a retired mental health worker, I don't recall any fox suicides, either. Of co.. read more

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