As a bipolar person, I've been depressed half my life & it can be very much like sludge. I'm intrigued by your title, which drew me in, but I didn't feel much of a connection between your title & your poem (not a good or bad thing, just an observation), altho I love both. I'm most reminded of those super strong type A personalities who never show any weakness all thru the years of attaining this & that, but then depression hits later in life & they crumble like a tower, but there are good aspects, as your poem suggests, in that they lift off the lid & take an honest look becuz they are forced to (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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4 Years Ago
thanks. i was thinking of how even crappy things of life (depression) can be "treated" and overcome.. read morethanks. i was thinking of how even crappy things of life (depression) can be "treated" and overcome ... :)
As a bipolar person, I've been depressed half my life & it can be very much like sludge. I'm intrigued by your title, which drew me in, but I didn't feel much of a connection between your title & your poem (not a good or bad thing, just an observation), altho I love both. I'm most reminded of those super strong type A personalities who never show any weakness all thru the years of attaining this & that, but then depression hits later in life & they crumble like a tower, but there are good aspects, as your poem suggests, in that they lift off the lid & take an honest look becuz they are forced to (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
thanks. i was thinking of how even crappy things of life (depression) can be "treated" and overcome.. read morethanks. i was thinking of how even crappy things of life (depression) can be "treated" and overcome ... :)
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..