Back Seat Gridlock

Back Seat Gridlock

A Poem by Pete
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One may be drunk with love without being any nearer to finding his mate. - Thoreau

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Image result for wife yelling at husband in car

She was riding shotgun.
I was driving.
She told me to take the freeway.
I took the backroad.
She insisted, "Take the next left."
I took a right.
Last thing she said was, "When you leave, don't forget to turn out the light."
Decree indicated, "Irreconcilable Differences."
Restraining order stressed, "Always maintain proper distances ..."


© 2020 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"If common sense had been consulted, how many marriages would never have taken place; if uncommon or divine sense, how few marriages such as we witness would ever have taken place!" - Thoreau

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Despite of all the despicable sorrow we suffer at the hands of those we kinda-sorta-love, I think all those irrational, imperfect relationships are just as important as that rational, perfect relationship that we so feverishly chase all our lives.
Good poem, quite relatable!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i concur. there is no perfection. the imperfections are key. intimacy is about letting that speci.. read more



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whoa speaks about the easiest and simplest reason for divorce luckily in my country it is still not enacted as a law but with the same meaning to a ground in annulment which is psychological incapacity oh how words can make it different but with the same meaning..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

thank you for sharing. hoping your automobile trips don't turn out this way ... :)
Despite of all the despicable sorrow we suffer at the hands of those we kinda-sorta-love, I think all those irrational, imperfect relationships are just as important as that rational, perfect relationship that we so feverishly chase all our lives.
Good poem, quite relatable!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i concur. there is no perfection. the imperfections are key. intimacy is about letting that speci.. read more

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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