Walking a Not-So-Fine Line

Walking a Not-So-Fine Line

A Poem by Pete
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The mass of men lead lives of quiet desperation, and go to the grave with the song still in them. - Thoreau

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Stradling the tracks of fate.
Tightrope of transient time.
Balancing bald belligerence and bashfulness.
Fickle feet take me where I do not wish to tread.
A masochistic mind conjures new pains.
A fervid, bankrupt, bicameral heart burns with festoons of fascist fate and fastidious faith.
My life searches for solvency ...




© 2020 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
“As a single footstep will not make a path on the earth, so a single thought will not make a pathway in the mind. To make a deep physical path, we walk again and again. To make a deep mental path, we must think over and over the kind of thoughts we wish to dominate our lives.” - Thoreau

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The speaker's words betray a dissatisfaction with the humdrum life balanced by a fear of risk. The last line is revelatory. He wants his life to be worth it in the end. Perhaps more than fate is at work here.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Pete

4 Years Ago

exactamundo. risk and reward are usually kissing cousins. we must be willing to step out and walk .. read more

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Added on January 8, 2020
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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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