Spin The Bottle

Spin The Bottle

A Poem by Pete
"

I love you not as something private and personal, which is my own, but as something universal and worthy of love which I have found. - Thoreau

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We were just thirteen.
The bottle spun.
Pointing the way to our hearts.
Our moist, young lips met.
Innocence was confiscated.
A new emotion was born.
Discovery confounded shame.
Things would never be the same ...



© 2019 Pete


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Pete
"Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake." - Thoreau

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I remember this “game” well, Pete. I think I was 12 or 13, and the first time I played a pretty girl kissed me... and then three other boys the same night. I fell in love, and so did she... for about three weeks. Is it strange I still feel that rush decades later, and I haven’t seen her for decades? A rhetorical question that speaks to the truth in your poem. Another hit, Pete.. and 80s music, too.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Pete

4 Years Ago

i too remember it well. i was terrified. she kissed me and i felt like running away. a flood of d.. read more



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I remember this “game” well, Pete. I think I was 12 or 13, and the first time I played a pretty girl kissed me... and then three other boys the same night. I fell in love, and so did she... for about three weeks. Is it strange I still feel that rush decades later, and I haven’t seen her for decades? A rhetorical question that speaks to the truth in your poem. Another hit, Pete.. and 80s music, too.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i too remember it well. i was terrified. she kissed me and i felt like running away. a flood of d.. read more

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Pete
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