Pete, the art and the poem fit so perfectly together, blending emotion and vision in one shot. What I read here is a coveted woman, perhaps one the narrator has never met, but knows well from a given distance. He can't have her but his mind has trapped that body and passion in the darkness, where he and she stay for a "life sentence." A creative work!
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
good review. interesting observations. you possess a keen eye for meaning. we actually have met .. read moregood review. interesting observations. you possess a keen eye for meaning. we actually have met and were together for a while but it will not work long-term for various life reasons - too many differences in our lives. we still talk occasionally and remain friends. thanks r.e. ... :)
Pete, the art and the poem fit so perfectly together, blending emotion and vision in one shot. What I read here is a coveted woman, perhaps one the narrator has never met, but knows well from a given distance. He can't have her but his mind has trapped that body and passion in the darkness, where he and she stay for a "life sentence." A creative work!
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
good review. interesting observations. you possess a keen eye for meaning. we actually have met .. read moregood review. interesting observations. you possess a keen eye for meaning. we actually have met and were together for a while but it will not work long-term for various life reasons - too many differences in our lives. we still talk occasionally and remain friends. thanks r.e. ... :)
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..