Keeping Score

Keeping Score

A Poem by Pete
"

They say marriages are made in Heaven. But so is thunder and lightning. - Clint Eastwood

"
Image result for god bowling

I was wrong.
She was right.
I threw a gutterball.
She made a strike.
Thunder is just God bowling.
And me wearing funny looking shoes in need of a little heartfelt ...
... cajoling ...



© 2019 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"Thunder is good, thunder is impressive; but it is lightning that does the work." - Mark Twain

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Kay
This presents an amusing look on relationship dynamics. Relationships experience their own range of seasons even within a single day at times, lol. Maybe waking up with a Winter coldness about last night's argument, thinking it over while you're at work and feeling a Spring renewal of affection, asking yourself if it's really your fault or theirs with a Fall kind of introspective quietness, and then coming home and making up with a Summer warmth. Or something like that, haha. Nice write!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Pete

5 Years Ago

Lol. thanks kay. what you say is true but still, it would be nice if i could win once in a while -.. read more



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Kay
This presents an amusing look on relationship dynamics. Relationships experience their own range of seasons even within a single day at times, lol. Maybe waking up with a Winter coldness about last night's argument, thinking it over while you're at work and feeling a Spring renewal of affection, asking yourself if it's really your fault or theirs with a Fall kind of introspective quietness, and then coming home and making up with a Summer warmth. Or something like that, haha. Nice write!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Years Ago

Lol. thanks kay. what you say is true but still, it would be nice if i could win once in a while -.. read more

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