One Order - To Go

Sex is nice.

It feels good.

 For a while.

In all it's permutations and styles.

But I'd rather have love.

It lasts longer.

You can take it with you.

It doesn't leave a mess on the bed.

Or in your head ...

Reviews

[DAH]

As John Lennon said in an interview: "You can have love without sex, and you can have sex without love" In other words, there's nothing wrong with loveless sex as long as the sex is breathtaking, which is excellent for the circulatory system ... but, then, love is the master.
Good poem, Pete!

Cheers,
DAH

[Pete]

The "free-love" era certainly changed a lot of thinking on the matter. anything that doesn't kill us is good for the circulation, especially in a sedentary society. all bow to the master - love. thanks dah ... :)

[DAH]

My pleasure!

[Rhayne]

To find true love is way better; far more satisfying to the heart, mind and soul. Makes life matter more. And sex isn't sex anymore, it's 'making love', the real thing.
I love this poem!!

[Pete]

isn't it though? the way it was meant to be - body, mind, soul, and heart. all or nothing. thanks rhayne ... :)

[LE Berry]

The body and the spirit met in a changing and difficult space. Nice descriptive of truth Pete.

[Pete]

indeed. what is true always rises to the surface no matter. cannot be denied. thanks LE ... :)

[Reianna Jewel]

This is the unspoken thing between two people. Most people want actual love, not to just be pleased in bed. I like this, it flows nicely and is nicely written, good job

[Pete]

yes, the way it was meant to be. thank you for sharing your heartfelt thoughts on the matter Reianna ... :)