If I Were the Man I Want to Be

If I Were the Man I Want to Be

A Poem by Pete
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Adversity introduces a man to himself. - Albert Einstein | Adversity is the first path to truth. - Lord Byron

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If I were the man I want to be I would not falter.
I would kneel steadily at faith's alter.
I would dance in the rain.
Despite life's pain.
If I were the man I want to be I would not waver in adversity.
My spirit would carry me when my flesh was weak.
I would have a good woman standing beside me.
I would love people who can do nothing for me.
I would knock down walls and still be able to see.
If I were the man I want to be ...



© 2019 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"Many men go fishing all of their lives without knowing that it is not fish they are after." - Thoreau

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You set yourself really high standards here. I love this write of yours. Rarely do we turn out to be what we aspire to. Hope all is good with you Pete.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Years Ago

indeed. thanks Chris, you made me laugh. i'm my own worst enemy sometimes. i'll be 'round for rea.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Take it easy then Pete. Recuperate well my friend. A little at a time. All OK with me :)

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I enjoyed all the quotes and found your poem most interesting. I guess many of us don't really know where we were going when we set out and wonder where we have gotten to as life progresses. Indeed yo beg the question well in this piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Years Ago

thanks John. sometimes i think that most of just go wherever the breeze takes us - the trick, i thi.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

5 Years Ago

Good point Pete!
"I would dance in the rain despite life's pain". Something tells me you are that man, Pete!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Years Ago

hi Kelly. just trying to say that i wish i was better at making lemonade when life hands me lemons... read more

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