Because

Because

A Poem by Pete
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“When you knock, ask to see God – none of the servants.” - Thoreau

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I want to talk to God someday.
Face-to-face without having to pray.
There's so much to say.
I want to ask him why truth had to die.
Why moon and rock can't lie.
Why the sun isn't shy.
Why my tears ran dry.
Before they fell from the sky.
I have to know why betrayal lingers like a cancer.
I'm adamant for an answer.
I'll keep asking for eternity and won't stop.
At least until my spirit's back on top.
I want to know everything that was.
I need to know why he does what he does.
I just want to hear him say ...
... "Because" ...


© 2018 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"The price of anything is the amount of life you exchange for it." - Thoreau

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I think there are many of us Pete who would like answers to a lot of questions. How about that, a one to one with the Almighty. There's something worth pondering on. It has to be the Chief, none of his minions. What are the chances? Your poem is an interesting read.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

6 Years Ago

imagine that. wouldn't it be something? would be a pretty long line, huh? always appreciate you s.. read more



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i really like to know the answers but then i believe there is the right time for it... as i was pondering on writing the calling i may not understand perfectly God's plan but i am happy that i can be an instrument to give meaning not only to one 12 year old kid but to my almost 300 seventh graders... He indeed has a plan

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

6 Years Ago

thank you sette. i appreciate your thoughts and sharing. he's sure taking a long time with mine .... read more
I think there are many of us Pete who would like answers to a lot of questions. How about that, a one to one with the Almighty. There's something worth pondering on. It has to be the Chief, none of his minions. What are the chances? Your poem is an interesting read.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

6 Years Ago

imagine that. wouldn't it be something? would be a pretty long line, huh? always appreciate you s.. read more
Hi Pete, I so agree with you here...I have plenty of questions myself. Nicely done, thought provoking little poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

6 Years Ago

indeed, if only we could. perhaps we do deep inside without realizing. thank you susan. your thou.. read more
This is such a powerful piece. I wish I could talk to Him. There are too many unanswered questions. Beautiful write, dear friend. x

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Pete

6 Years Ago

sure would be an interesting conversation huh? thanks Giulia. may he bless you with your heart's d.. read more
I wouldn't mind having a conversation with Him, myself. Imagine that! Great piece, Pete...thought provoking as always. If you happen to get a word in, direct him my way, ok? ; )

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Pete

6 Years Ago

thanks. will-do Kelly. i took a number and am waiting my turn - long line. he seems to be busier .. read more

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