“You must live in the present, launch yourself on every wave, find your eternity in each moment. Fools stand on their island of opportunities and look toward another land. There is no other land; there is no other life but this.” - Thoreau
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Sometimes a meaningful life is the hardest thing to find. Imagine, also, the shock of realising you never had one but spent so many years believing you did...
If only they sold these things at a drive-thru; or built them into that so called "education" when we're kids...
I like the Thoreau quote in your Author's note. It's a lot like the Mary Oliver poem: "When Death Comes"
When death comes
like the hungry bear in autumn;
when death comes and takes all the bright coins from his purse
to buy me, and snaps the purse shut;
when death comes
like the measle-pox
when death comes
like an iceberg between the shoulder blades,
I want to step through the door full of curiosity, wondering:
what is it going to be like, that cottage of darkness?
And therefore I look upon everything
as a brotherhood and a sisterhood,
and I look upon time as no more than an idea,
and I consider eternity as another possibility,
and I think of each life as a flower, as common
as a field daisy, and as singular,
and each name a comfortable music in the mouth,
tending, as all music does, toward silence,
and each body a lion of courage, and something
precious to the earth.
When it's over, I want to say all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.
When it's over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.
I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
thank you charlie. i love the Mary Oliver poem. appreciate you stopping by to share thoughts... :)
they say we have to live meaningful lives but then sometimes because of this purpose, it is inevitable that we lost our ways and finding it too hard to go back to what it should be, the right road.. this poem is something else
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
thanks sette. i like your thoughts. do we need to lose our way to bring us back to our "right road.. read morethanks sette. i like your thoughts. do we need to lose our way to bring us back to our "right road" again or perhaps to discover a different road? Thoreau wrote that, "Not until we are lost do we begin to understand ourselves." ... :)
Sometimes a meaningful life is the hardest thing to find. Imagine, also, the shock of realising you never had one but spent so many years believing you did...
If only they sold these things at a drive-thru; or built them into that so called "education" when we're kids...
I like the Thoreau quote in your Author's note. It's a lot like the Mary Oliver poem: "When Death Comes"
When death comes
like the hungry bear in autumn;
when death comes and takes all the bright coins from his purse
to buy me, and snaps the purse shut;
when death comes
like the measle-pox
when death comes
like an iceberg between the shoulder blades,
I want to step through the door full of curiosity, wondering:
what is it going to be like, that cottage of darkness?
And therefore I look upon everything
as a brotherhood and a sisterhood,
and I look upon time as no more than an idea,
and I consider eternity as another possibility,
and I think of each life as a flower, as common
as a field daisy, and as singular,
and each name a comfortable music in the mouth,
tending, as all music does, toward silence,
and each body a lion of courage, and something
precious to the earth.
When it's over, I want to say all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.
When it's over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.
I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
thank you charlie. i love the Mary Oliver poem. appreciate you stopping by to share thoughts... :)
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..