For my Love....

Let my love warm you.....
like a fire that is carefully stoked and never burns out....
let it blaze so brightly that its warmth lingers in your heart.....
let it ease your tired soul and embrace you in its radiance.....
Breathe in the smoke, let it bring a wistful smile
and the occasional blast of fireworks take your breath away....
Let my love warm you.....let its sizzle enthrall you....
the dancing flames entrance you....
let your eyes glow with the passion in my embers,
burning only for you....
let my heat fill you....cast down your shield and
let it find even the coldest corners of your heart....
let my love heal you....open your arms, breathe me in...
let me dance across your flesh....
let my love in....and know that the spark that
ignited the day we met
remains an eternal flame.

Reviews

[PianoandPage]

this poem has an earthy, goddess quality to it. i love it. you keep the imagery of fire but showcase it's many effects and desires. how it can warm, burn, enthrall, titallate, nourish, and entertain.

you dance with this and it brought a smile to my face.

"let me dance across your flesh....
let my love in....and know that the spark that
ignited the day we met
remains an eternal flame." - a perfect romantic end.

[Davidgeo]

You're going to start the wrong kind of fire with that s**t. I'd love to get drunk with you for a night though, I'm a bad person.

[Chris]

The focus of your intent is one special person...

[Wildecat]

This is a beautiful love poem, and a fine tribute to Micah. Well done.

[Micah]

It leaves a warm feeling with me to read this about your man. I know him very well... I think. :-)

[Christopher Marlowe]

Patricia,

This is a very lovely poem, however, I sense there may be another level you are missing if you want to travel there. If you're interested, I will give you my thoughts but not in a review. Let me know.

CM

[bailish]

Thank you for this very positive expression of your love. You sound very nurturing. You don't expect fireworks all the time, but occasionally would be nice.

Your allusion to being breathed in by your lover is a wonderful thought.