Charles...

60s Kaos....

Charlie Charlie, Were you mad

Charlie charlie, were you glad

At havoc n bloodshed that was spread

Of a beauty Queen that lay oh so dead

 

What was that power you held, to me a true mystery

Does'nt really matter though, coz now your just history....

 

Sexy Sady not much of a lady

But she went off with a Bang

Sexy sady, Charlies Baby

So lucky not to hang

 

But I still does think of him every now n then

Not sure if hes even alive, I axly hope that hes dead....

Author's Note

Please read n be brutally honest, Please ?

Reviews

[bobc]

P...unfortunately he is still very much alive. Sadie passed away in 2009.

In terms of the read itself, I'm not sure if you've quite captured the creepy quality of the subject. Also pretty sure the questions raised have been answered. Because we've reasonably concluded that, yes he was/is crazy and, yes, he was pleased about it, the edge to your questions is lost.

This might work better for you if it was styled like a nursery rhyme...like the Lizzie Borden one for instance...one stanza for Charlie and one for Sadie. Could work for you...bobc

[Pete A...]

I thinks you hit the nail on the head..What I wanted was 4 more just plain creepy, thankyou 4 review..