He Knows I'm Alone

He stands in the dark outside my window. He knows I'm alone.

Author's Note

I wrote this for the 12 word horror contest.

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

its chilling !!!!!!!!!! amazing it is good and creepy muhahaha :P

[C.L. Ritter]

Thank you.

[Pancake Bunnykins]

NOoooo. this 12-word gave me chills.

[C.L. Ritter]

Then I did my job. Thank you.

[B]

And you nailed it
12 words that could scare the heart out of my chest

Bravo

[C.L. Ritter]

Thank you, glad you like it

[Robert Parlange]

Wow, horror haiku. Very good.
I'm afraid I'm too long-winded for something like this.

[C.L. Ritter]

Thank you. I only did this for the contest, usually not my style.

[Leon C]

I think you need to change the tense of either 'stood' or 'knows' as they don't match.

But very chilling none the less

[C.L. Ritter]

Oh I hadn't caught that. Thank you!