Save me

I'm not mad at you.
I'm mad at myself.
The person I am today
Was not the one from yesterday.

It's not you, it's me
I have failed miserably.
My life is a mess
My emotions in distress.

Can't do anything right
I've given up the fight.
I lay my head down
In my tears I will drown.

I lift up my eyes
And whisper to the skies
Will an answer come from above?
Come, swoop down, like a dove?

But the sky is silent
And my heart is violent
I can't stand any longer
Stuck here, left to ponder

With this bitter, nagative emotion
I dying in this ocean
Will someone come save me?
Save me from this misery.

Reviews

[RûbbërS&osla..]

Beautifully written. I can almost feel your pain just by reading your words. Perhaps that's because I can relate to your situation, in a very big way.

[Healed but Scarred]

Thank you. It's interesting how poetry flows when one is in deep tbought, right?

[RûbbërSøul]

When you tap into those deep, dark thoughts the words just fly onto the page. Do you find that?

[Najam Us Saher]

I wait for someone to save me too. I feel the same. You have expressed my feelings too. I guess we feel same. Whatever it is I like what you write. It makes me feel it's okay to feel like this and I am not the only one. Thank you for giving me hope.

[Healed but Scarred]

Its always good to find out you're not the only one 😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree with you.