Tell Me I'm Crazy

Tell me I'm crazy. Tell me I'm not.
Say that I'm pretty. Or maybe I'm hot.
Whatever you say. I wanna believe.
I hope we're a forever and never leave.

I'm afraid to give myself to you
I don't know what you're gonna do
The spark you have for me
Is it enough to set me free?

Will it get ride of my fear?
That you'll always be near
You'll never leave my side
I'll never have to hide.

Will we be an ever after?
A room full of cheerful laughter.
Small giggles and cries
Tear of happiness in our eyes.

Your gentle hand around my hand
I hope you understand
If I give you the key to my heart
Promise you will never tear it apart?

I'm scared to get broken
Used like a subway token
I want to be treasured
True love's not measured.

How long does love last?
Something I've always asked.

Reviews

[RûbbërS&osla..]

I love your writing. The rhyme schemes, the flow, not to mention the subject matter. We think about a lot of the same things, you and I. Excellent poem.

[Asmae]

why did u choose that title?

[Healed but Scarred]

I wrote this poem when I had my first boyfriend that i real feelings for. I was super scared i would get heart broken.

[Asmae]

interesting

[RûbbërSøul]

I took it to mean that the writer would prefer an honest comment, even it was slightly insulting, over a preprogrammed, insincere "I love you". He/she just wants to hear something real. I can totally relate.

[Ankit Miglani]

Thank you for this. It's beautiful . It lasts till the time when the other treasure will consider you too as a dime. Keep up the good work.

[Najam Us Saher]

That's a question no one knows. I can feel your emotions and the longing pain in your heart. I loved this poem. Well done.