the endless war

a short poem i came up with yesterday using imagery

As i sink my blade into my enemy's flesh i see the bright crimson blood splatter on to rigatomey.

as my council cloak blows in the wind I sense a enemy behind me. here i go again slashing more flesh

Author's Note

first poem so please take it easy :). any advise would be helpful

Reviews

[Junehilary]

My grandson the poet!!!! You are getting better all the time! I am so proud of you honey!