finding your way

it is just a poem about the sun and the moon and how they are lighting up the path of some traveler.

the golden rays of the sun,

brush against the water's calm surface

illumanateing it,

 

the silver light of the moon,

lands in puddles,

breaking through the forest canopy

 

in their infanant beauty,

they glow,

illumating the path of a lonely traveler

casting shadows but helping him find his way.

Reviews

[An Open Venue]

well done; every traveler needs the light to find the way; you have strong imagery and the light shines bright

ven

[Marina]

I absolutley adore this.
Amazing job.
My favorite stanza was sthe 2nd one. There just something i love about the reflection of the moon on water.
It's sorta mesmerising.

great job. Awsome write.

XxStaySweet,
Rina