Losin' It

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I apologize if you find this gruesome or sick. It was really written in a rage and I hope you don’t find it a problem. LOL I am not as crazy as this poem makes me sound.

 

You may not beleive it when I say


You mean nothing to me but you also my everything


Im a good girl gunna stay that way


The things that run through my mind could taint a god


The beauty in death makes me want to kill


I love and I hate you


You will always be in my soul but burned in my mind


I have gone crazy in hate an love


My life is altered and shifting away from the light into the forest to my right


The words falling from my mouth only words, the silly thing


But if you could reach into my mind you would go insane


The smiles that appear on my face are of the thoughts of your death at my hand


But I think I will spare you is this love just that strong


I want you dead


But be mine please I beg of you


But as you sleep my thoughts will run wild of slitting your throut and claming whats mine...


Your heart.

Reviews

[AK]

Beautiful poem! Polished choice of words! Great write!

[hmm]

This has a poetic feel to it when read aloud,
I really enjoyed the depth of this write...awesome...100/100