Food

Food

A Poem by A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv

Food

Oh, how much I love you

When the tears wont stop

Your there

You calm the storm raging inside me

You coat the sour taste at the back of my throat

You may be bad for me

But I love you so

When I have no one to speak to

I talk to you

You give such satisfactory

Chocolate, sugar, butter

Bread, cake even applesauce

I love you all

 

My sweet and delicious comfort!

© 2012 A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv


Author's Note

A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv
When i am really upset, i do have the habit to sit down and eat something.
I am a food lover <3

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Now you've done it!!... I'm thinking of the sinful treats in my pantry!!! and Spring Break is right around corner!! Thanks for the visual of Chocolate... it will be dancing in my head until I succumb to it. LOL

A Delicious read... very refreshing! Thank you. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Food is good, we all love food and some even use it as a comfort thing. Nicely done write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice write :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a very good poem,both funny and serious,serious in the sense that it is simply true that eating can provide comfort, but also a problem or the wrong answer to a problem.You have got this exactly right, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I LOVE FOOD SO MUCH and I love this AMAZING piece of writing. Well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, food is very good. I don't think anyone can not like this poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


ok........... good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh how food does have a way of comforting, rather it is taste or just that bite of comfort that you hold it in your hands when you need it. This is a nice write, it expresses the feelings well. I for one go for the chocolate... and ice cream. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great job
-Eleanor

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Now you've done it!!... I'm thinking of the sinful treats in my pantry!!! and Spring Break is right around corner!! Thanks for the visual of Chocolate... it will be dancing in my head until I succumb to it. LOL

A Delicious read... very refreshing! Thank you. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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