Who I am.

I am told to hold something that represents me

It can be anything i want

But what am I to do when I can not choice

Or even think about what it is that gives just a glimpse

To who i am inside

I can not choice

Because I do not yet know

Who I am.

Reviews

[FelicityAllona]

As I read the entire poem I thought that this something I am going through right now. It is really hard to do something if you don't know what you want and who you are. I love the idea behind it. :))

Though in my opinion, I think the word choose is more appropriate than choice. :))

[☮Lizzie❤]

cool

[Regrets]

Great write, really likes this piece.

[Jordan's Back]

i think the only thing a person will ever know about who they are, is wether they are loved or not. This show that struggle to gain that insight people have sought out for years.
Happy Searching, and wonderful write!

[AK]

Wow! That is deep. What you say is very true, we are just whom we are, but we still don't know who we are..

[Amila Jay]

I feel like that too at times, Excellent write:)

[hopelessromantic]

i think it it is how i feel sometimes great write

[reflectingus]

You've done a good job with this :) I guess many of us have phases in life when we're just looking within and finding ourselves. That's a really cool phase actually, (I'm going through it too) and eventually, we all end up finding ourselves. :)

[Eleanor]

Great job
-Eleanor

[Jabriel]

it the topic that will get your writer in to it
you made a good choice to go on the "who I Am"
and not the "who am i"