Reality

Reality

A Poem by A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv

Sweet tender lies

I tell you it’s a beautiful lie

Live by the rules of pretend

Feel the love

The guilt-free atmosphere

It’s a illusion

You know this isn’t right

What’s to lose

Reality is inescapable

You can fall into your own web of lies

Live as you wish

But when you finally open the door to the real world

You will fall flat

You will be consumed

And your lies will fall apart

 

It is best to never lie to oneself…

Reality is no illusion.

© 2012 A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv


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This is reality! :)) Nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wonderful poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Raw, but true. Very nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raw, Deep, and very true

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is raw and truthful

two thumbs up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Disillusioned into the reality they don't exist. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"It's AN illusion"
love it :) great poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true, great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great job!
-Eleanor

Posted 12 Years Ago


great write so true

Posted 12 Years Ago



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