Angel I Do Not Diserve

tears of angels 
wash away the stains of blood
for then i pray
my sins have done

you showed me mercy
you showed me grace
to love an angel
is just pure pain
irresistible charm
gentle caress 

a bed of roses
i shall lay
i do not deserve 
my angels love
death to claim

my light does flicker
my love still burns
for loving my angel
I do not deserve.

Reviews

[Sometimes Blood]

Very, very cliched.

[☮Lizzie❤]

OK now u have just gone creepy on me. But very good write

[Jordan's Back]

a bed of roses
i shall lay
i do not deserve
my angels love
death to claim

Excellent

[AK]

Wow! Really nice! The title is 'Angel I do not diserve'. Was that purposeful or was that supposed to be 'angel I do not "deserve"'?

[Amila Jay]

Wow, I really like the flow of this poem, the pain and sorrow. Brilliant write:)

[hopelessromantic]

i like it good work

[Eleanor]

I really liked this. Great job!!
-Eleanor

[FelicityAllona]

i agree with butterfly kisses ^^

this is indeed a great poem ^^

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

If something is meant to be, it will usually come back whether we feel like we deserve them or not. Or they deserve us. Nice write. I liked this, very well-written.