Fearful

Fearful

A Poem by A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv

A blossem 
Loving warmth i feel deep within
I cower like an idiot
I do not know how to feel
should i embrace the love i feel
Should i run
Will i fall?

I am fearful to feel 
To open my doors
I do not want to be exposed
A heart without it's walls
Infection could set it

Waiting and watching
Will i fall sick and die
There is a voice, says its right
Nothing to fear
But my brain has yet to be quite.

I am fearful.

© 2012 A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv


Author's Note

A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv
Sometimes this is how i feel :(

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I tend to think its a bit silly NOT to be fearful, i guess it is more of whether or not you want to show that you are to the world or keep it locked inside. I admit, I've been fearful all my life, partially to blame my childhood but fearful for the future as well.

Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I tend to think its a bit silly NOT to be fearful, i guess it is more of whether or not you want to show that you are to the world or keep it locked inside. I admit, I've been fearful all my life, partially to blame my childhood but fearful for the future as well.

Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, you certainly do not venture into exploring new patterns of words...sticking instead to the over used and cliched. nice write, but lacking in depth

Posted 12 Years Ago


What is there to be fearful of? I have been in the same boat and have had people ask me that very question. And to tell u the truth i dont have an answer. Very good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very well expressed, transfers the emotion to the reader. The second word is 'blossem' shouldn't it be 'blossom'? The first line with a mistake can put off a reader, really. It's worth typing your poem in word and running a spelling check before publishing it on café. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very Deep Passionate Write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It is sad to have fears in the back of your head but your heart wants to be free. Nice write, thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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