Shadow of oneself

Shadow of oneself

A Poem by A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv
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3 words... Ghost, Shadow and Death.

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Like a mirror I will shatter
And you will never see me whole again...
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The blade smooth against my throat
freedom I never felt before
Lies that no longer hurt
I was free

A shell of who i was the haunting screams
A shrill cry in the night
Tears unseen
Unintended agony

I am but a shadow on the wall
A ghost of my own self
I begged to be free
To see as you see
And now I must face my true death

A dark place I rest
Waiting for the day
I shall walk among the living again
As one being made whole.

© 2012 A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv


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I am but a shadow on the wall
A ghost of my own self

Really nice .. :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


nicely put

Posted 12 Years Ago


very deep

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really nice write, liked what you did with the words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Another Awesome Write

Posted 12 Years Ago


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grt write :)
sad and dark !

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simply written, raw emotion of darkness for oneself. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple yet emote ... good read :) x

Posted 12 Years Ago


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That was really well written. Thought provoking. Well done, Patricia!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 22, 2012
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A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv
A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv

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My name is Patricia I am 17 years old and a proud mother of a 2 year old lil girl. I love my daughter with all my heart more..

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