Haiku

Warm gentle drops fall

Soak me in your gentle rain

Wash away the day

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Sweet passion arise

Fill me with your tender love

Kill the hate inside

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Angel and demon

Provoking lovers condemned

Twisted tales of love

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Dark oak standing tall

Leaves reaching high to the sky

Living a long life

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Hold me close lover

I hand you my heart and soul

Forever I’m yours

Author's Note

These are my first attempts at haiku, please let me know what you think :) I know its not traditionally bout nature.

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully written with a skilled hand! Love the flow and feel to it! Awesome job!

[AK]

Beautiful! Omg they're really good. I haven't written hajjis myself. I feel they are really constricted with so many rules, but your's is awesome!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I have yet to write even my first haiku. Now that Ive read this I want to give it a try one of these days. Nicely done!

~Anna Rose

[Robbie~xoxo~]

OH WOW!!! I love this plethora of Haikus~ (Senryu)-is the genre of haiku. I love,love, love it! Nice work.

[Asb]

love is always best :)
Cute write with faith and expectation....!