True Loves Victim

To feel you close to my sends me falling 

running your fingers through my hair

under the covers

every time you touch i feel

love is in the air

only you can make me feel this

vanish all my hate

each day you cross my mind

so close you are to my heart

very few can get so close

i welcome you

come send me

to unexplained pleasure

i only wish 

my house was closer 

LMFAO!!! This is kinda a nonsense poem as you can see straight down it spells Loves True Victim lol i tried and i hope you enjoy it! I will probably try to edit it when i bump up my vocabulary, if you can think of any better lines do let me know lol i know this needs work. Thank you :)

Reviews

[AK]

The was awesome! I just got a rr and it said-
True Loves Victim
A poem by True Loves Victim
Requested by True Loves Victim
It was beautiful. It hardly seemed like you were writing words for the letters but as if the words weaves themselves together to automatically form the letters. Keep up the good work, Patricia!

[Jordan's Back]

it sounds really cool and it does make sence Its shows that love can sometimes hurt, but still be a joy at the same time. Wonderful write!

[J Todd Underhill]

Acrostic poetry I love it. I am glad you pointed it out I would have missed it.

[Sometimes Blood]

this isn't too bad

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I liked this 'nonsense' poem, it was very cleverly written. Nicely done! :)

~Anna Rose