Vivid Images

Vivid Images

A Poem by A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv

Vivid images
Rippling water
A picture of pure love
Shattering hearts surround the grove
They beat to the rhythm
Death has yet to come
Living broken-hearted
A twisted fate of love
My imagination
Is wild
What ifs cloud my mind
So many possibilities
Of twisted love
Devine

Vivid images
She kisses his lips so sweet
There marriage just beginning
A loving embrace
To lay next to her lover 
So warm in lovers embrace
A gentle push to soon behold
A child
Death comes 
Not for
But of
To give birth
To deaths kin
A twisted fate of love.

Vivid Images
True loves kiss
So young and all bliss
No shadow can pierce
Consuming their love
Such beauty to behold
So many what ifs
We shall never know...

© 2012 A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv


Author's Note

A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv
Not really sure where this really came from so... hope you enjoy :) And plz comment.

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Another beautiful Write

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Asb
really vivid...!
amazing imagination :)
super beautiful :)

Asb a.k.a aditya singh baisla

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is really beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is truly beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bittersweet vivid imagery. Very inspirational. Nicely done!

~anna rose

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweet but it sounds tragic...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautiful! Patricia I absolutely love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very graphic
Sweet
Loving
Full of energy
Exciting
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 12 Years Ago



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