Crashing Sea

Crashing Sea

A Poem by A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv

The crashing sea
It speaks to me
Of wonders
Treasure to never be discovered
It is a sweet, sweet lead
To dreams 
The crashing sea
It speaks to me!

Feel it on my skin
A cool sensation
Yet grim
I welcome it in
To my heart it will swim
Crashing sea
Consume me!

© 2012 A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv


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Loved this! Great imagery, powerful flow crashing like waves. I'm a sucker for anything Ocean and or Sea related


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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very true description...
a nice read !

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved this! Great imagery, powerful flow crashing like waves. I'm a sucker for anything Ocean and or Sea related


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have captured the sea in its simplicity.. The Sea evokes many emotions, it can be very consuming indeed. Nice write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The sea is lovely. It is realy good it is a very imaganitive description of the sea

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the ocean. Can create a peace and safety from this world. I like your description in your poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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