Cracked

Just how I am feeling right now...

I had fallen in love, still am. I thought you were the one, i hope. Its not over and I hope it never will be. I know it wasn't a very long time, hell I can't believe you have my heart, but you do. And I won't take it away from you! I hung on your every word, I believe you still, but i wonder why you had to lie. A simple little lie, harmless I guess, but if you lie about that what else could it be? I love you and only you, you hold my heart, that's very true. I want you to love me to, as much as I do you and its hard for me to understand why you would ever lie. I tell myself it's nothing, but I can't fool myself, I wont. My eyes shall stay open. i will watch what is happening around me and never will i forget what you said last week. I see comments and action, you think I don't see? I pay attention to those things, I have been hurt to many times not to watch out for such schemes. I opened my heart to you, praying you would be the one, it was one little lie, and it could be for my own good, but truth is all I want! Tell me do you love me, or does your heart belong to another girl? I would rather be hurt now, so I may recover... My heart is cracking, will you let it break?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad story in this tale. I like the honest emotion and desire to move on from the pain. In this short story. Create a tale of love and learning the truth. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote