The Lies And Hate

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The Lies And Hate Can Anticipate, But If Your Wrong, You Can Tell You Loved One So Long, Life Is A Game We Play, To Tell Ourselves Everything Will Be Okay, But Is It Really, Deep Down You Know The Feeling, That Its All Falling Apart, The Tears And The Broken Heart, You Know The Truth, Don't Fix The Hole In Your Broken Roof, Let In The Sunshine, Cause It Only Takes One Time, To Bad It Isn't That Easy, So Your Broken Heart And Mind, It Cant Be Fixed Every Single Time, Its Good My Life Isn't Like That, I Have My Baby Girl, Shes My Life Shes, She Does Everything Right, Shes Perfect, And We Know Whats Next, Grr, I'm Running Out Of Rhymes, To Put On Paper From My Mind, Haha Theres One, So I Guess I'm Not Done, Our Future Will Be Great, Because Its What Were Going To Make, All I Want To Do, Is Love You.

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

i liked this! it was so odd and yet so wonderfully unique!
I liked these two lines the best... "So your broken heart and mind, It can't be fixed every single time"
and
"Our future will be great, because its what we're going to make"
SIMPLE, yet so PROFOUND.

so many times we think ''it wasn't good enough"
as long as it was your best shot, you should think ''its great cuz i gave it all i have''

a really thought-provoking poem, though i didn't expect it to be.
thanks!

[R E Tree]

wow what clever rhymes I love how you have built this poem with expressing so much of your emotions. thank you for sharing

[racyvanillapixie]

You write so beautifully, and I am so utterly jealous, I'm totally astounded! Great work x

[AlmostAlice]

This is really good!
- Grr, I'm Running Out Of Rhymes, To Put On Paper From My Mind - Lol love that.
awesome write.