STUPID RAIN

At times it`s best to write something down when you cannot stack your feeling any further.

                        STUPID RAIN

I watched the dancing rain

It sang the same song again

The sound of each drop falling down

Calling your name as it touches the ground

 

Yes I am lost somewhere

The path that leads nowhere

Why the curse targeted me?

The only sound I can hear

 

Slowly the sound of drops is fading away

Now I am moving into the time you walked away

I am holding the pieces of broken picture frame

That beautiful opera of love sounding mayhem

 

The same feelings, the same pain

Has taken over me once again

The rolling tears made me realize

That my condition is still the same

Then my thoughts came to life

I surrendered myself to the rain

How lovingly it wiped my tears

And promised to never let me cry again

 

Wouldn`t you come and hold me again

Touch me softly and remove the pain

Stupid rain is trying to take your place

Come and tell it, you wouldn`t let me cry as always….

I LOVE YOU

 

 

Author's Note

I kept it very simple i don`t know why no vocabs used here just simple words. Hope you all like it.

Reviews

[Praveeta]

A beautiful poem depicting your emotions quite well. Thanks for an enjoyable read.

[prodicallife]

Dear Praveeta,

I so very appreciate those kind words of yours.

Thanks once again for pulling out time to read my ink.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Sid]

Beautiful poem, you used rain as a metaphor very well and you brought the emotions very well too...great write!!

[Asb]

"ankhiyan udeek diyan ...dil washa wardan...aaja soniya tenu wasta hai pyar da...!"

beautiful read....filled wit innocence!

[Lively]

Cuteeeeeeeeee

[kurdapiaful]

Nice! :)

[Andrea Vargas]

Simple is sometimes better. I loved it it was a very fantastic read!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. I like the desire and reason for the poem. Rain slow the world down. I like the way you ended this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tasha]

I loved it! You really used the rain to let out your emotions. It was so beautifully written. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Ruth]

Rain is always beautiful when used a metaphor for the emotions! This is stunning love :) Beautifully written! The intensity of the heart strings in this piece are inspiring and shimmering xx

[Black]

a nice expressing poem of the feelings you have