That Girl

love is the most serafic thing in the whole world and love stories are divine.....

                                That Girl, that one girl

That girl, that one girl i`ll always remember..

That first gaze

Those pair of black eyes

Each time I saw them

They drove me high

 

That wheatish complexion

That sweet smile

Pulling off her eye contact

And looking again in a while

 

Those departing lips

Then kissing each other

Those melodious words

I`ll remember them for ever

 

When she spoke

She was the beauty of a queen

Yes I can feel my love for her

Coz I am still in a dream

 

Those twinkling eyes

Often answering me

Even asking me questions

At times confusing me

 

Then with a click

Leading through the passage of solutions

Opening a gateway with smile
to the World of Love or illusions

 

That girl, that one girl i`ll always remember..

 

The way she called my name drove me crazy

Only we were lively mad in love

Rest the World seem to be lazy

 

I said I love the way you take my name

She said- is it so?

I said, I think I am in love with you

She said- I to think so

 

The freshness in the life I could feel

The fiddle changing its rhyme

Composing a melody of my life

That was once mayhem

 

The sweet fragrance

Of the fresh strawberries

Waited at the door of my college

Escorted me to my love

Very first thing I would love to acknowledge

 

That innocent smile she would pass me

Lifted me up in the air

I would float aimlessly towards her

Neglecting the gazes over there

 

 

Our talks would drift from dusk to dawn

Evenings were the flavor of our taste

Those cuddling those innocent touches

The night lamps used to remind us, it`s getting late

 

But the one curse night

Fainted it all

Those arguments those words

Dented it all

Nothing could I say

Nothing could I do

With each and every breath

I was losing you

 

The way drove you away from me

No path again ever led towards me

The time behaved incredulously

Lunge of night behaved ruthlessly

 

Your frenzy love

Often jolted me at nights

I got staggered

And a lot frailties

 

I finally lost all hopes to live

Not even a single breath I could believe

At last only the words were left I could write

I am quitting it…..let it be wrong or Wright.

That girl, that one girl i`ll always remember..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Praveeta]

It's an amazing poem. Emotions well portrayed. I really like the stanza

Those twinkling eyes

Often answering me

Even asking me questions

At times confusing me

[prodicallife]

Thank you Praveeta, I much appreciate your review.

Thank you once again.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[aviiar:))]

it´s incredible..
i´m wishing to fall in love with a man who can write poems about me..:))
that girl loses almost a half of her life for losing you.hehe:))
keep it up.u nver fail to amaze me..:D

more power..

-AviiAr(abby)-

[sarah]

sooooooo sweet! I love this great write!

[AngelAfterlife]

Beautiful!!!! Great Poem hunni

[Akshat♥]

I really liked it a lot..
you expressed your thoughts really well!!!
keep writing:)

[Dewella~Vintella]

I love the emotion showed in this piece. The flow was wonderful, pulling the reader in through the end. Your words painted a vivid picture as the time moved on through love and love lost.

Wonderful job. keep it up. ^^

Vinny~

[Linear]

You meet them you lose them and all the time you think you love them, but in the end you see nothing, no sign of love is in their eyes, even then you won't believe them when they say their love is dead, they no longer need you...... Good work. :0)

[deeps]

Wow this is really good, I enjoyed the emotions in this so much.

[Tasha]

I love it. You captured the emotions very well. Great flow and structure. This was wonderful.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[TheElfPrincess]

Great emotions within the poem, great flow and structure as well. Well done, love it.