NEW MOON....

just a few words with the lots of pain, feelings, fumes of old memories...was gettn hard to bear this hence scriptd it out....

I`ve nothing to loose, i`ve got nothing to gain

I even don`t know what`s my aim..

Lying alone i realised, there`s nothing in my life i can change

i`am supposed to be here, with no name..

 

 

The few images i remember, are all dark

There`s nothing beside them, just a few red marks..

 

 

The proximity of the death, brings a new hope

But the endless way to it, breaks the enthusiastic rope..

 

 

I`ve nomore roles left to play..

Please someone wind it now, coz it`s hard to die each day..

 

 

The curse of life on me, would not end so soon

I`m tiered of the transitions, under NEW MOON..!!

Reviews

[Legacy]

prodicallife,

A life taken through compromise... a promise of hope in disguise, death is neglecting the subject of this poem, seems the more we "want to die" the more prolonged it seems until the end.

The red lettering of these words give way that death is near, the writing... a bit large for the thoughts, however, I feel like the text would be perfect if not for the size.

Your words are dark and smell of deep frustration, a comprehendible frustration when you are searching for the end.

This poem was powerful and pungent; it wreaks of end of life desires.

You should consider a spell check and enter this into the Poetic Infusion Contest Dark Secrets, if you have not already done so.

Thank you for sharing,

Legacy

[Megan]

Just know you're not alone and that things will change,
the new moon guarantees it.
Life has its hard places but it also has its beautiful places, it has its peace and storms
And both will always come :)
I know what you're feeling and I have so been there.
But this is wonderfully expressed, you have such a great way of phrasing!
"The proximity of the death, brings a new hope
But the endless way to it, breaks the
enthusiastic rope..."
I LOVE this line

[Delight]

I must agree with the last reviewer. The poem was moving and caused me to reflect on the valleys in my own life that I've so often had to cry my way through. Life brings such pain sometimes, but as they say, "When given lemons, make lemonade." You can always find a little sugar to sweeten things up. Thanks for this eye opener.

[Lucy-Mia]

WOW such passion and longing. your words moved me to despair, yet made me feel good at the same time, how do you do that? AMAZING!

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is very tricky. We will make more mistakes then wise decisions. We must learn what we want and find peace in what we desire. No peace in death. We never know what may lay upon the next path. I like the words. "under NEW MOON..!!"
Sometime we need a new moon to change our luck. A excellent poem.
Coyote