There are some phrases that have grammatical errors and some stanzas that don't make too much sense; however, the image is there, it might just need a little bit of work :)
In the second stanza, "one who views what a lots of eyes miss out." There needs rephrasing such as: too many, so many, or too large a number of, in place of, "a lots,"
A bit of melancholy here, of being the man behind the camera that sees all of these beautiful things, but through a lens rather than his own sight, and that is what he secretly longs for, to put the camera aside and merely experience life, to take pictures with his mind's eye instead.. Good one :)
Simple and plain yet beautiful....its just a simple click that makes us look at the things in a more pleasing way..yes...its the photographer who does it....
a true write...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Dear Sandeep,
Yes you are very correct with your view about the photographer that you s.. read moreDear Sandeep,
Yes you are very correct with your view about the photographer that you shared. He is the one, who has to view, analyse and then picture the same thing with a touch of his thoughts.
Thanks a lot for reviewing my work with such an appreciation.
That is great to hear. Would definitely turn up to you someday if I need some.. read moreWoowww!!!
That is great to hear. Would definitely turn up to you someday if I need some guidance :)
Thanks
Prodical
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I am sorry but I could not trace you on tumbler. My username is prodphotos I would appreciate if you.. read moreI am sorry but I could not trace you on tumbler. My username is prodphotos I would appreciate if you could find me thanks
Photography is a love for me, to capture a moment in time and let it breathe, is what I say :) Photography clicks something precious to remain, this is a beautiful poem. The essence of life is captured not only through taking the photo but right here, in your words. You have breathed life into the ether by clicking photos and giving them a voice. Just beautiful work! x
I feel whelmed to read that appreciation from you. Creative with the review also wwooww!! ;) :D
I am also a pass time photographer, I love clicking moments with my iphone :) This is actually a real life experience that a part I have experienced but yes, a lot of imagination added to flavor it up.
This is ridiculously awesome; usually I don't like poems that use a lot of repetition but this is amazing and so beautiful and just really well done. A total joy to read :)
Also, I feel so enthusiastic after reading your appreciation. I am honored.
I would appreciate your reviews over my work in future.
Thanks once again.
Stay blessed
Prodical
10 Years Ago
no problems Prodical. Also note if you send a read request i will read them, but if you send me a li.. read moreno problems Prodical. Also note if you send a read request i will read them, but if you send me a link in message, I read them faster. Also I hope to see some reviews from you as well. :) Thanks again
Also, thank you for reviewing my work with so positive appreciation.
It feels really great.
I would appreciate your reviews over my work in future too.
Thanks once again!!
Stay blessed
Prodical
10 Years Ago
I will read it and you post those reads for me on my read request. I am faithful with keeping up wi.. read moreI will read it and you post those reads for me on my read request. I am faithful with keeping up with them. It helps me a lot to be able to have them listed for me. I spend a lot of hours reading here. Most are inspirational and heart warming poems and then the short stories are inventive. I read novels if they are well written. I will not fight my way through bad sentence structure. Misspelling I can deal with and typos, but sentences without periods that run a paragraph long is tedious. Learn how to write, then tell the story. That's what we all have to do.
10 Years Ago
Dear sue,
I am pretty much impressed with your verdict about how you experience a poetr.. read moreDear sue,
I am pretty much impressed with your verdict about how you experience a poetry is and should be.
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