That's...

A luscious night with unkown love of the life.

That’s gracious

The way you looked at me last night

The way you kissed the wine,

Which was dancing in the glass to have kissed you.

The way your look sung the luscious you

 

That’s mesmerizing

The way you toned the bottle

With the juicy lips and toppled with those

Gleaming demands of your eyes.

 

That’s turmoil

The way you wanted me

In your dreams, in your arms and everywhere

In you.

The way you bespeak

The felicity of desire

 

That’s seducing

The way you unwrapped the last button of

The ensemble.

The red smock shifting down

Slowly then, swiftly to

Get intimate with the floor exactly

The way you got me.

That’s faithful

The way your fingers

Invade, explore, greet and leave

Every instance of me.

The way you pouch my lips into you

And add a strawberry flavor in between

To never end that delicious feast of you.

 

That’s memorable

The way you left the bed with wrinkles

The red straps of party gown

The twisted un-rested cap of the wine bottle

The grey ash of the smoke

That suffocated the room

The fragrance of the Gucci

The last fading flavor of strawberry that twisted my mind

To the flows last night.

The last paper holder which held a message

That you purchased the last night.

Author's Note

That's more of a story come flow write.

Hope you guys like the story.

Reviews

[captain]

I really like the formatting of this one, the flow of words comes smooth and flowing. It is just right to entice every reader of how the night goes so well. Very nice!

[prodicallife]

Dear Captain,

Thanks for reviewing my work.

I am much respected with those wonderful words from your end.

Stay blessed!!

Regards
Prodicallife

[captain]

with much respect from me as well, you are certainly welcome :)

[Ruth]

I like the way this is tale like within a poem. Beautifully executed! All elements met to seduce...impress...engage and act on...wonderfully expressed. Much enjoyed x

[prodicallife]

Dear Poppy,

I am much respected with that wonderful piece of appreciation over my work.

Thank a lot!!

Stay blessed

Regards
Prodical

[Ruth]

Be blessed too and most welcome!

[Dewella~Vintella]

I loved this, as you said, it has somewhat of a story feel to it, but still holds lots of poetic value. I for one happen to like the story feel of it, with just the right amount of poetic measure to pull everything together and create a beautiful piece. Wonderfully done.

-Dew

[prodicallife]

Dear Dewella,

It's great to hear from you after a long while.

Thanks a lot for those words of appreciation, you have made my confidence a lap higher.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What an enticing write... you etched each stanza into a work of art... molding a vision of intimate moments, each line drawing her seductive curves to near perfection. Well done, my friend! ~xoxo~

[prodicallife]

Dear Robbie,

You appreciate my work so well, that I feel really encouraged and enthusiastic to keep writing.

I am whelmed with those words of appreciation.

Thank you for pulling out precious time to read and reviewing my work dear friend.

Regards
Prodical

[Michelle N. H.]

I love how you've constructed the poem, how each stanza has its own title beginning with "that's". It's creative, appealing and very fitting also. Your words are colorful and sensual, a canvas in which I saw a beautiful woman. It was a pleasure for me going through these lines of yours.

[prodicallife]

Dear Michelle,

Hope you are doing great!!

How appreciative it is to know that you have finally driven the readers as per your thoughts.

Thanks a lot for those appreciative words.

Regards
Prodical

[Michelle N. H.]

You're welcome, and I'm doing good, thank you very much! Hope you feel the same. Have a splendid day, Prodical :)

[prodicallife]

Thanks Michelle.

It's great to hear from you :)

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing use of description. Your words took me to good places and the description create good vision. Each set of lines told a story and brought the reader into the tale in the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[prodicallife]

Dear Coyote,

Thanks for the appreciating words.

It feels great.

read moreDear Coyote,

Thanks for the appreciating words.

It feels great.

Respect.

Regards
Prodical