Enough is Enough

At times you do it and name it love but, the other person makes you feel it as a responsibility.

                                ENOUGH IS ENOUGH!

You cried

I took every tear and hide it under a smile

You devastated

I stood with every piece of yours in a while

You felt weak

I gave you my strength to stand high above

But, lastly remember

Enough is enough.

 

You held my hand

When you were scared

You hugged me tight

When you were sick of hatred

It was always an option for you

To keep me at the time of envy

But where were you, when I had no one around me?

For enough is enough.

 

You took my heart

You said I want to keep it

You evdeavord my thoughts

You said I want to conceive it

How the things

Turned so difficult for you to hold on

“you said it burnt you from inside and you want to leave it and move on”

For enough is enough

 

I am not 

A capsule of strength

You use me as a dose

For your worst attempts

Let me keep it simple

Let me tell you how it makes me different from you

I lost myself

To win over your smile

You lost me

For the things you ever do.

For enough is enough

 

I am not

A piece of pie

I am not

A drug that can take you high

I am a human being

Who lived to make you full of life

A person who wanted a space beside.

 

You couldn’t offer me a space to rest

Your rudeness was even best

For the deeds you demand from me

You pin a dagger down in my chest

Let it be

Go and make yourself free

I have some life left let me live

I have some life left let me live.

For enough is enough.

 

I died each moment

When you dreamt of a person in your life

It felt to me

As I was chopping off my heart

With a pointed knife

I stood beside you

So that you never fall

Neither your dreams nor your love

But I wanted you all.

 

 

You already killed me

A million times

Now what do you want

My last breath, My soul

My few heart beats

I am left with nothing but a body of flesh

Which burns within it’s own hatred heat.

For enough is enough.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tasha]

Oh wow, this was brilliant and so sad. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. You really outdid yourself because I felt every emotion in this piece. I loved how you centered it as well. This is a very emotional piece and I think you expressed yourself well. Keep up the fantastic work!!
~Tasha

[captain]

What an emotional outburst this piece felt to me. Enough is Enough, but is it enough? Sometimes our heart played us so much that we keep on doing it despite what you feel is more than enough. For a time it is hard to move forward when the person that keeps you hoping is still around, space is the best way to think clearly, free the mind and heart from the burdens of the past as you move forward in your life. The best thing you could do in a situation like this, i think is to forgive yourself first, learn to love the little things of what's little bits of heart beat in you. In time, in this experienced you'll learned how life goes. A very good piece, great!

- Captain :)

[prodicallife]

Dear Captain,

I am honored that, I was able to make you feel exactly what I felt at the moment I was composing it.

Yes it is true, at times you have to build time bounded bridge to make sure two hearts sing in the same tune ever. Two individuals at times land to a position where they start feeling dark with each others presence, I feel we must build a bridge for sometime.

Keeping in mind the time span is very important as, one must keep the respect of love, genuine aspect of humanity and love is very important.

Keep living high and stay blessed always.

Thank you for reviewing once again!!

Regards
Prodical

[captain]

You are very welcome :)

your words spoke of respect with careful care and love - an understanding like no other.
I am glad to have read this, its also good to reconnect to the feeling of this piece, reminds me of what experience i had, thanks for sharing it.

[prodicallife]

You are welcome and I am glad to hear that :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must reach the end. Enough is enough. Many types of people. Some are givers and some are takers. Hard to find someone who know how to do both. I enjoyed the poem. I had to read again. Good flow of thoughts led the reader to a strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[prodicallife]

Dear Coyote,

Hope you are doing great!!

Your words of review have always been a sheer symphony to the strings which always kept the sounds great whenever I wished to sing my words.

I appreciate your thought of hunting a heart that could be a gem combination of bi-ways. I an absolute agreement respect your words.

Thanks for reviewing my work.

Stay blessed.

Regards
Prodicallife

[prodicallife]

Hey Tasha

Well, Thanks a lot for your wonderful reviews.

Your words are a pot of serafic water that boosts me up to write good.

Thank you again for your concerned review.

Regards
Prodicallife