Her sight

Her sight

A Poem by Pratyush Choudhary
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A small poem on a person's emotions when he looks at his crush and can't tell it to her...

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I was alone ,my heart felt lonely
missing the person with whom my life I would share
I lifted my eyes, looked around
And BEHOLD!! She was there....

Her hair flowing like a river's birth
Her face glowing like a goddess on earth

My heart skipped a beat on her sight
I gripped it & held it tight
My mouth was agape
and my heart did escape

I feared it might tell her all...
But it hung midway in the hall.
With hesitation, it started to shine
I knew it, after all it was mine

My heart never came back,
It never got to her.
I sat there forever
Just admiring her...

© 2015 Pratyush Choudhary


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Pratyush Choudhary
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Awww this is so CUTE and BEAUTIFUL Poem. Love it. You are a GREAT writer who can put feeling into the words, so attractive and heart touching. Keep writing. Love your work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pratyush Choudhary

10 Years Ago

Oh thank you very much!!...This motivates me to write more of them...
Destiny Dreamer

10 Years Ago

You are WELCOME

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Added on April 19, 2015
Last Updated on April 19, 2015
Tags: Love story, Crush

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Pratyush Choudhary
Pratyush Choudhary

Shimla, Himachal Pradesh, India



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